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vote if it good!!!!!
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zo
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PostSubject: my pome for school   my pome for school EmptyThu Dec 17, 2009 8:32 pm

so we had to do pomes for school 2day so this is what i came out with people post what u think


Snowman

The velvety hat is pr
ecariously placed on
the snowman’s head.
His round face is decorated with
button eyes,
carrot nose, and
mouth made out o
f rough oak sti
cks. A bluste
ry wind blows t
he shaggy scarf Whiz!
The thick packed sn ow
stomach is draped in a pla
id vest with black button s.
The last part of the s no
wman, of course,
of course is the bigge
st of them all. It’s glist
ening, clean, white snow. I
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it dose look like a snowman it got moved over wow am pissed but just read it and tell me what u think


Last edited by zo on Thu Dec 17, 2009 8:33 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : idk how i got messed up tryed to fix it)
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PostSubject: Re: my pome for school   my pome for school EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 3:20 am

What grade are you in? No teacher, not even a grade one teacher would accept this. I don't care if its X-Mas but no teacher should be having a 10 year old spell that bad. Switch to the special class, seriously, you NEED it.
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PostSubject: Re: my pome for school   my pome for school EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 9:28 am

Ermm, this doesnt even make sense. i dont understand one bit of the poem.

Im sorry but thats my opinion.
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PostSubject: Re: my pome for school   my pome for school EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 9:46 am

Emmm.. it supose to be what ?A text to your mom ? i dont understand ... ?

Eat da wtf?
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PostSubject: Re: my pome for school   my pome for school EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 6:36 pm

Lol, this is plagiarism again this is ripped off a site.
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PostSubject: Re: my pome for school   my pome for school EmptyFri Dec 18, 2009 7:03 pm

Fallon wrote:
Lol, this is plagiarism again this is ripped off a site.

lol not it no i wront it in homeroom and it was a snow man when i typed it but when i pasted in here it did not comeout hole it cam out like that and what sit is bc i did not so hahaha dont post lies that not what anyplayer should do
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